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I now realize that humans are the stupidest creatures on the face of this planet. They change history for their own amusement, and then centuries later tell it as if it were the damn truth. It seems as if only the creatures of darkness can keep their truths, keep their sanities, and keep everything they once believed in intact over time. The vampires, the demons, the twisted and demented, all of these have basically been unchanged for all eternity. While those who face the darkness, those who look into the light with love instead of disgust, have changed time and time again what they call God.

Question race through my mind that make me ponder, make me think, make me wonder. Why did this so called 'God' create Lillith, the first succubus, before creation Eve? Why did he not just skip the whole sad time and go right to the 'pure' one? And if God was so great and mighty, why did he even have to ask Cain, the first father, 'where is your brother Abel?'. Maybe this thing the humans worship really isn't there, maybe we are just scaring ourselves with a joke. Maybe humans just created him as a figmentation of their minds so that they don' feel totally alone one this little rock flying through space. But anyways, what does it matter to me, I am alive and I am eternal.

Now I know this is someone reading this besides myself, because I never re-read anything once I have written it. Your human aren't you? I can tell, because only a human is curious enough, or should I say ignorant enough, to pick up the diary of a vampire like myself. I am giving you a warning right now to put down this diary and put it away. Still here aren't you? Foolish humans, when will you ever learn that there is more out there than what you learned in your schools. We are out there, I am out there, watching you always. Yes I am your menage a trois of pain, suffering and death. You have brought yourself too deeply now little one. Your drawn to me now, drawn into the story that you know is going to unfold before you. Well then, perhaps we should begin hhmm? I guess it would all start at my second that is....

Itachi: You lack you know why?
Sasuke: W-why..?
Itachi: Because you lack it....hatred.

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