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She is coming

She is here

Doe eyed

With baggage

Rolled on luggage carts

Itís time

To unpack

Now this house

Is her home

She is staying


But itís okay

Weíve done this before

I threw her things

Out the window

What did I care?

I wanted the neighbor

To notice me

I was high on

Letting go and


Still unnoticed

Letting go of everything

Bitter because

Of equanimity

All things abandoned me

Except she

Bags packed

Ready to come back

Maybe we can stick it out

This time around

Now I know better

What I should let go of

Ready to learn

From Equanimity

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