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The minute hand hasn't moved from the nine since the day you made me die inside.
I feel like the hour bar trying to catch up to the eons of never ending solitude our minutes have tried.
Why is it so hard for me to break through the pain given away in angry bouts of warmth?
Why can't I find my way to the light you provide so willingly? Why can't I be so sure?
I wish I was sure.

Feeling so confused about the letters you wrote me explaining.
Explaining all my shynesses away through your words that I can't relate.
That I can't relate.

I'd like to know heart's contempt for words of pain expressed in lies that made me die.
Your final cry of love stapled to my heart, "I love you on and on and on". I'm so tired.
I'm so tired but I can't leave you now.
I can't forget how you loved me so.

The pardoning of lonliness filling the cracks of life's shell.
Can't you pardon me? Wont you pardon me?

Feeling so confused about the letters you wrote me explaining.
Explaining all my shynesses away through your words that I can't relate.
That I can't relate.

So now I sit alone in the dark of shadows caused by looming guilt and regret.
I'd soon give in but I still cannot forget.
I can never forget.
I will never forget.

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Pushing a lover to love another. Are you turned on?


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The following comments are for "Forget"
by Tyrant Monkey

Great Work My Man!
I liked this song Steve-o. I could actually hear it in my mind as I was reading it. Great lyrics that actually touched me! Great job!

( Posted by: Wicked Voodoo [Member] On: April 16, 2003 )

Thanks!
Thanks bunches! =D

( Posted by: Tyrant Monkey [Member] On: April 16, 2003 )





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