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Mon, Mon...
What is this stinking odor?
Come hither, mon amour, lips open wide,
for I shall pour the pure sky into you.
My cleansing jets of pleasure will give to you pure paradise.
You will then have to wipe,
but soon you will be able to run and jump
and go to ride bicycle.
Mouche, mouche ma plume.
Fly, my feather.
You are now free.

Vous ŕtes libre.





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Reverend AntinormalitÓ


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The following comments are for "Le Douche Phantom"
by TheTesticularPrancer

Douche
Very funny Rev.

With ALL love,
Lena

( Posted by: TheRealKarmaTseringLhamo [Member] On: January 30, 2009 )

Ha ha! Hee hee hee hee!
Ha ha! Hee hee hee hee!

( Posted by: thetesticularprancer [Member] On: January 31, 2009 )

oh
hahahaha. i love it. thats just ridiculously amazing. thank you.

( Posted by: thesadpoet [Member] On: February 9, 2009 )





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