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I want to tell you
That even though it doesn't always seem it
I love and respect you

For it was you at the end
of my misty rainbow
And your love that brought
me into the opaqueness of
the ultraviolet
Even though the moon
was tainted and shattered
from Injustice

And when I stumble and fell on my walk
over and over again
It was you who picked me up
And placed radiant angels beside me

Thank you...

And when the sun leaves its
flickering images in my
heart and mind
It is because you brought me
to a place in my soul
I never knew existed...

I wanted you to know
That I love and respect you
And miss you so.....
You are my essence
The other half of my being

The night can be fierce
But when the sun rises
and the daybreak of heaven comes
I know you'll be there...

I want you to know that

Jeanne Fiedler

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The following comments are for "Heart and Soul"
by Jeanne

love is joy, love is pain
Written in a conversational style, this almost tumbles out - a stream of words, full of meaning. I know this, feel it with you.

I love some of the phrases - 'The night can be fierce'! right with you there! '...the sun leaves its/flickering images in my /heart and mind.



( Posted by: Sebastian08 [Member] On: January 29, 2009 )

This is SO beautifully inspirational;-)
You have no idea how inspirational this was to me right now, I SO needed to read brought tears to my eyes. My oldest daughter in California (who is a Jew for Jesus) has a prayer chain going on for our family. I believe in prayer, though I practice Tibetan Buddhism, I believe, like the Dalai Lama that all faiths have the potential to lead to good, and prayer in particular is such a powerful thing, I do believe and have always believed in G-d, not your interpretation of G-d, but G-d is G-d no matter the interpretation. A higher consciousness, power, whatever...even in Tibetan Buddhism which does not believe in a G-d head per se, there is the concept that we are all a part of a consciousness of G-d, a great energy, place of luminosity and bliss called Nirvana or it might be interpreted as Heaven by some...a place where the suffering birth and life and all ends and our souls are or aspects of energy are finally FREE...

Thank you for this. Especially now after my surgery, and with a crisis of emotional pain beyond compare that faces my children and grandchildren, I needed to read something along these lines, thank you Jeanne. I don't understand how anyone can live life or look around them and not see that we are so much more than our physical bodies and that there are forces at work beyond our physical perception, the good and the exist. To some it may be one in the same, neutral energies, or all, but how can anyone be an atheist? That is so beyond my personal experience. I have seen that there is so much more...I have see it and experienced it.

Blessings to you and yours,


( Posted by: TheRealKarmaTseringLhamo [Member] On: January 29, 2009 )

Well done Jeanne!
Beautifully said Jeanne...I wouldn't change a thing!


( Posted by: Beatrice Boyle [Member] On: January 30, 2009 )

like a poem that i composed for my mum, your poem is emotional

( Posted by: Dgreat [Member] On: February 2, 2009 )

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