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--yet one more scribbled--

Laying in bed
waiting for tiredness
to overwhelm
I write this bad poem
trying for sleep
yet I've not been
in bed long enough
a few minutes
spent fading
and I think
dozing won't be far
even if only
an hour or two.





By: David E. Howerton




[11/16/2002]


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Coyote Laughs so begins his favorite game
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