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living sometimes is the bain of my exsistance but i live with it day by day beat by beat while struggling with life's heat like poison in my veins i feel as though i will never gain like the feeling of being slain i want to surrender but refuse to loose this ever going battle untill the end my will will never bend i'll still be on top of the sattle


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by macobsoldier

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