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Wrap my eyes in bandages so I won't see the cruelty of my love betrayed.
Wrap my heart in silk, so it won't twitch and shake
In pain of losing everything it thought it had.
Tie my hands behind my back so I won't hurt myself
Now, that I live without a life.
Wrap me, whole, into your lies, so I won't know I'm falling
Into this black pit of mourn, where all hope dies,
Despair is born...

Just let me die like a moth in the flame, but remember
It was none of your fault, but mine.
And please, forget my eyes and heart,
Forget me as a whole,
And taste the joys of worlds of sun
As happiness is ment for you,
My love.


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Two thumbs up.
Liked it a lot. Very well done. Great images.

Stay cool.

( Posted by: sinner [Member] On: April 16, 2003 )

now this really is something.there's a meaning, a story.if you can understand it, you'll love this.that's all

( Posted by: northerain [Member] On: July 14, 2003 )

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