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no
I told you
we can't do
a revolution today
daddy's sick
and he's got to get
the taxes done
go watch TV
play with the cat
what?
kitty wants
to do a revolution too?
that's nice
go tell kitty
we'll do it
tomorrow
daddy's stressed
no daddy's dressed
he's just s-t-r-e-s-s-e-d
go google it
use the new toy
daddy bought you
what?
who's stressed?
oh Gaza
never mind that
we can't do anything
about it
find something nice
on the computer
what?
no NOT THAT!
Jesus why do they
put this stuff on
where little kids
can see it!
now listen
daddy has to do
these 'cough' taxes
so why don't you
read the book mommy
got you for Christmas
here it is
Revolution In Pooh Land?
awh shit...........


Peter Buknatski
Montpelier, Vt.


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Peter Buknatski


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The following comments are for "At Home With The Radical Left Nuclear Family"
by PeteySweety

poewhit
Maybe they should have a tax revolution and instead of making holes, fill the tax loop holes for all the rich, that don't pay tax.

( Posted by: poewhit [Member] On: January 16, 2009 )





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