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The first time I saw you
I knew it was true
That I had love you forever
And that is what I will do
You don not know what you do to me
You do not have a clue
You do not know what it is like to be me
Looking at you.

I will reach your hand
In the cold of winter
I will reach your hand
In the heat of summer
But if my short life
Can not reach the dawn of spring
I promise you in heaven
I will reach you with my wings.


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The following comments are for "First Sight"
by LainCoubert

poewhit
Funny how, love at first sight, can alter a persons life. Like ore going into a blastfurnace and being changed in an instant.

( Posted by: poewhit [Member] On: January 15, 2009 )

o.o
yea you're correct.. xD

( Posted by: LainCoubert [Member] On: January 16, 2009 )





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