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Could this be an insanity or a harvest of real love?
Meeting the reoccurence of your absence,
Which stands aloof from sight like an unassigned angel.

An insect that sucks sugar is freed of blame
Because there should be a limit to sweetness of sugar.
Beauty, not a priority, but real love that
Stations my free focus.
Focus for what! For keen interest,
Interest for what! Interest to be your life king.
Your qualities: Personality, tribe, christianity and
Human relation, extremely encouraging, while
Your weakness, quite accomodating to a sagacious reasoning.

My foreign beauty, if I were to choose between
Earthly paradise and you, with no hesitation
I would choose you, not only because you are
My earthly paradise, but because
Whom you are as human have influenced and
Eloped my avalenche of utmost inner zeal.


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