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I got some kind of big thought
But those words don't make no sense
And if they don't make no kind of sense
I get down,

But not in a funky groovy kind of way
In a depressed as Hell, "what am I doing with my life"
in a weird kind of way,

So what if I have some dirty, down right dirty news?
Does that make me dirty in a bluesy sex way?
and it just gives you the blues,

But if you think I'm dirty and I'm feeling bluesy
Does that make me some kind of dirty blues player?
so, I've just got some down right dirty hell yeah blues.

Does the wadded up paper ball or the bowling ball fall faster?

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The following comments are for "Some downright dirty hell yeah blues"
by thesadpoet

da blues
Fun. I liked this. If you broke it down into 1-3-4, (4 being a refrain or hook) 9 bar blues... this would sing as a great blues song. Thanks

( Posted by: jonpenny [Member] On: January 8, 2009 )

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