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Buried in the grass
Silver two piece suit
Rain will not come
Guns begin to shoot
Yet still the sun shines.

No speech to recite
Way too much foundation
Staring at the ground
Awaiting the conversations
Keep your composure.

'Oh, she looked so beautiful;
I offer you my sympathy'
Wondering where they were
Before she became a memory.
I think, but do not say.

And now I am waiting
Waiting for the breakdown
Genetic eyes of titanium
Still there is no sound
What the heck is wrong with me?

Call me if you need anything.
Come on, let's be realistic.
Do they think I will call?
Its just being cordialistic.
Is that even a word?

Someone is washing dishes
That is such a sweet gesture
I think I'll go to bed
Relieve some of the days pressures.

No, I take that back.
This is a thunderstorm.
Heart never felt this way,
I literally feel torn
In half...broken.

What was I thinking...
I should of jumpped in that grave.
Then I hear her voice
'Now is that any way to behave.'
Wow, I really sound like her.

I pray for sleep, I pray for dreams
Of the two of us together
I pray that when I awake
There will be a break in the weather.
Storms plus the sun bring rainbows.

I love you ma.

Thank God I have my writing to release all my inhibitions and conquer all my fears.


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