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a new years eve poem composed by me and my 8 year old nephew Christian....hes cool!!!!


Spider-Man 4 is gonna be in the movie
Theater soon...

That really makes my little heart swoon....

Hes gonna fight Carnage...

I dont know what rhymes with Carnage????

Maybe Ill buy Popcorn...

Maybe I wont...

Maybe Spidey pees his costume...

Maybe he dont...

In Spider-man 5 hell fight the Vulture...

I dont know what rhymes with Vulture????

Stippidy Bippidy Dibbidy Doooo...

What the deuce is wrong with you????

In Spider-Man 6 hell fight The Lizard...

Guess what happens???

He rips out his Gizzard!!!!!



------
Terence Patrick Burns


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The following comments are for "Spider-Man 2009"
by kilgoretrout

Spidey Man
He's got your wit. Happy New Year to you both. Cool poem.

( Posted by: robnjop [Member] On: December 31, 2008 )

I don't know what rhymes with villain
Super duo. Obviously Christian brings the more restrained sensibility to the work. I think next Christmas you should get him a rhyming dictionary -- just in time for Spider-Man 7.

( Posted by: poeteye [Member] On: January 1, 2009 )





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