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The drawing of two people is a magnetic attraction.
The pulling passion.
Simple expressions.
The pussy cat lion.
A strong man cry'in.
The thing about love.
A fling.
A ring.
A hurtful word sting.
Memories relapse
and the future perhaps
the stamina.
To strengthen the weaken.
To stop the forsaken making.
Why not love making?
Reasons why my spouse is my shadow.
Reasons why my heart is my spouse.
The thing about love.
Things come.
Things go.
One thing does remain
in pain,
in vain,
the love is sustained.

Charles Perry, Jr.

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The following comments are for "The Thing About Love."
by cperry3041

Good job! A plethora of emotions and thoughts thrown in a mix that works for me. Worthy effort of putting to pen a well explored and intangable, but oh so needed, condition. Thanks

( Posted by: jonpenny [Member] On: December 29, 2008 )

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