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Why canít I be?
A Poem

One evening I was depressed,
And was walking in a lonely path
Suddenly, the wind blew up the dry
Leaves fallen on the ground
Swirled and took them to the sky
It was magic and wonderful
Seeing the dry leaves dancing
In front of my eyes
Then a thought crossed my mind
Why canít I be like the wind,
Which had lifted the fallen
Leaves from the ground
And made them to touch the sky!
Why canít I help those who have
Fallen from the grace,
Those who have failed
And those who are left behind,
Help them to find their lost hope
And bring back the smile to their face.

By :- G.S.Vasukumar


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The following comments are for "Why canít I be?"

Why canít I be?
Nice poem G.S. Nice thoughts and desires. It was a pleasure to read. Robert.

( Posted by: robnjop [Member] On: December 28, 2008 )

Why Can't I Be?

Thank You.

( Posted by: G.S.VASUKUMAR [Member] On: December 29, 2008 )

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