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What are these legs,

covered barely by a

short skirt, singing in

the autumn sunlight,

my hand is touching

them and is stunned

by their earthly weight.



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by gamblerman

Just a fleeting sensation,,,,
M

( Posted by: gamblerman [Member] On: December 22, 2008 )

Fleeting...
All is fleeting...yes;-)

( Posted by: TheRealKarmaTseringLhamo [Member] On: December 22, 2008 )





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