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Words cut the flesh
Penetrating into the heart
Blood tears fall with each stroke of the clock
The scars a forever reminder
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I remember the sound
Of your heart cracking
I could feel the tears
Fall from your eyes
An unforgivable mistake
I can never repent for
Sorry means nothing
For stripping you down
A crime punishable by death
Yes I live on not knowing why

Living on the edge of death and your love



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