Average Rating 0.00 (0 votes) You must login to vote Words cut the flesh Penetrating into the heart Blood tears fall with each stroke of the clock The scars a forever reminder ------------------------------------------------------- I remember the sound Of your heart cracking I could feel the tears Fall from your eyes An unforgivable mistake I can never repent for Sorry means nothing For stripping you down A crime punishable by death Yes I live on not knowing why Living on the edge of death and your love

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