Lit.Org - a community for readers and writers Advanced Search
 




Average Rating
0.00

(0 votes)

You must login to vote

Great Depression
11/30/08

He's annoyed by
a persistent nostalgia

He suddenly see's
his uncomfortable distance from himself
and is pursued by
a persistent nostalgia

In the winter time
It's sought to muddle
the new panic
in virtuosity
and villainous
vitrifications
of vodka
vicodin
vicodin

He feels strange pain and stiffness in all of his joints
and when he wakes up, his chest hurts
and his body's heavy



------
039298f3@opayq.com


Related Items

Comments

The following comments are for "Great Depression (Draft 1)"
by SirEdwinSantos

poewhit
A lot of that going around today - bottoms up - toast - brost - vitamins

( Posted by: poewhit [Member] On: December 22, 2008 )





Add Your Comment

You Must be a member to post comments and ratings. If you are NOT already a member, signup now it only takes a few seconds!

All Fields are required

Commenting Guidelines:
  • All comments must be about the writing. Non-related comments will be deleted.
  • Flaming, derogatory or messages attacking other members well be deleted.
  • Adult/Sexual comments or messages will be deleted.
  • All subjects MUST be PG. No cursing in subjects.
  • All comments must follow the sites posting guidelines.
The purpose of commenting on Lit.Org is to help writers improve their writing. Please post constructive feedback to help the author improve their work.


Username:
Password:
Subject:
Comment:





Login:
Password: