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He made off with lots of
sheckels didnt he????


Thatll buy a whole lotta
stuff and stuff...

One fish two fish three fish four
I smell the police knockin at my door
Maybe i deserve it maybe not
50 billion is kinda alot...

A question from a simple man...

Why would anyone with half a brain
think people on wall street would
act in the public interest instead
of their own financial interest????

I saw a banker swingin from a tree...
I smiled at the justice didnt faze me...
I saw a broker broken in two...
I laughed my head off boo hoo hoo...
I saw a president duckin for cover...
I wished that shoe hit that dumb motherfucker...

Terence Patrick Burns

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The following comments are for "MADE OFF"
by kilgoretrout

I'm Too Old For That
Juvenile, but I enjoyed the cadence.

( Posted by: awhippingflame [Member] On: December 17, 2008 )

Still laughing Terence!
I'm still laughing out loud...this is vintage Terence material! Very clever!


( Posted by: Beatrice Boyle [Member] On: December 18, 2008 )

Last stanza
Loved the last stanza, and the rest was okay. In my head it sounded like Bob Dylan singing Dr. Seuss.

You're never dull, my friend. :)

( Posted by: Viper9 [Member] On: December 18, 2008 )

Senior MomentTerence!
Sorry Terence...I hijacked your post to add to it and screwed up...I hit the submit button by mistake, before I was finished! SENIOR MOMENT!

Ignore it please~!


( Posted by: Beatrice Boyle [Member] On: December 19, 2008 )

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