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Early every morning
An amazing thing happens:
The sun, it rises.
It may sound like
Well, like common sense,
But sometimes, you see
People forget the sun,
And get lost in the darkness.

Now, early every evening,
An astonishing thing occurs:
The stars move out
To light the darken sky.
You might be saying
Well ďDUH!Ē
But let me ask you,
When was the last time
You looked??

Once in a while,
When itís just the right time,
Rain falls from the sky.
The sun is hidden
And the stars are gone.
What is the point here?
Itís a question really.
Why, my friend,
Do we only miss things
When they disappear??



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