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Ferris wheel
Inside this sky,
Upside down,
Again
Pushing this sail
Blowing your wind
Taking me to the
Other side of
This world



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The following comments are for "Upside Down Again"
by FireFly747

Swept into the sky
Loved this one, Firefly. You swept me up into the sky, upside down, with your verses.

( Posted by: Viper9 [Member] On: December 18, 2008 )





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