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See...I've lived in the pretense and learned that there was no recompense for non-reality based senselessness and I've found myself caught up in words...uh...wheather they flowed or not whether I glowed in those moments spent remains to be seen or heard of that's why spoken words are sooooo...important to me

...A sense of freedom is what they be and I flow, I flow with the words used to express ones self..I see them clearly in and out of any ordinary meaning...I seek them out and sometimes they...they find me

I ready my mind for the exploration of them and they in turn comfort me and keep me with my sanity...they allow me to just BE...myself

So...if nothing else, like attracts like and that's why you're in my life I do wonder though...where oh where is this road going but still I follow through not knowing...

The reasons or formulas but I investigate it's cause with no need to pause...for I am careful

...and I know that you are there to lift me...catch

I thank the powers that BE.



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by LMJ


I enjoyed your stream-of-consciousness piece. The meaning is - awaiting the meaning.

There's a pattern of transitional movements, as the coming and going of phrases and the birth of naturally-derived embryonic ideals. Some of your words contain similarities to the daily life cycles of the reader.

( Posted by: Ariana [Member] On: December 11, 2008 )

It's nice to see you, thank you for stopping by...

It's all true, words comfort me, they allow me the sense of knowing that they can be used for edification and yes embryonic ideals as well as old ones...they can absolutely mesh and not feel the pain of being used, I have used words to slice, cut, love, admire, teach, explain and think...they are jewels and treasures to be nature and culture and languages and of course...Food!

"embryonic" one of my favorite...words!

( Posted by: LMJ [Member] On: December 11, 2008 )


what a great compliment! whenever you decide to come by, it will be great to see you and have over with BIG HUGS!...don't be surprised if the 'hood' looks like yours!

love you Des!

( Posted by: LMJ [Member] On: December 12, 2008 )

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