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I'm listening to the stars

In the sky tonight, how did we ever get so far?

This perilous journey that we all face, some with one, most with two,
Though the destination is the same for all.....

No matter where we go, or what we do, who we love, or who we hurt,
We're all stuck here on this lonely earth

Born with one foot in the ocean and the other here on land,
Our hearts turned up, up towards the sky, wild and blue.......

Night falls and through our hands fall the stars like so many grains of sand,
The milky way stains the sky again........

I once was blind, but now I see,
That the face you thought you knew so well....
Well, it just wasn't me.....

Waiting to cast aside these earthly chains and dance with the gods once again,

I am forever.....

Listening to the stars tonight

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