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time has a way
of bending space
so i leave you here
my darling

the wind has
carried
me afar
i'm coming to
but
do not know

i float
atop mountains
on clouds
in rain

rush
behind shadows
and fall
again

i get back up
but
to what song
what season

i wade my way
through
illusions past
to colonize
this place in time
somewhere
we can meet

i'm here babe
a thousand
light year
miles away
loving you
through a lens



---end---

alternate titles:
"THIS POEM IS ABOUT SCHIZOPHRENIA"
"I DEDICATE THIS POEM, TO MY ADDICTION TO PORN"
"BABY I WANT TO CLIMB OVER AN OBSTACLE AND INTO YOUR PANTS"
"ETC, ETC, ETC, ETC"


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