i wonder DOT DOT DOT i wonder
- published: December 11, 2008
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i came home, and drank a little
all three of my roomates were gone
i left the house and drank some more
i came home later all three asleep
was i ever really alone?
To Be Read, Slow And Fervent
weed epiphany no. 85017403921
whaddya mean i gotta have a title!?!?! aka 4:04AM Monday February da Second
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"i wonder DOT DOT DOT i wonder"
The entire time
The entire Time you were drinking you were alone. Every sip of the Bud or the Labatt Blue.
Life is in fast mode and every one exist to simply exist.
] On: December 12, 2008
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