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i came home, and drank a little
all three of my roomates were gone
i left the house and drank some more
i came home later all three asleep
was i ever really alone?


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The following comments are for "i wonder DOT DOT DOT i wonder"
by FangChen

The entire time
The entire Time you were drinking you were alone. Every sip of the Bud or the Labatt Blue.

Life is in fast mode and every one exist to simply exist.

( Posted by: nucleusfire [Member] On: December 12, 2008 )





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