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the world is uncharted

cast aside your beliefs now

for the love of god
he who was quicker

to destroy himself

believe you me

you are not

what they make you out to be

you are far grander

the songs you sing

are of a tone

so untainable

god himself shattered

his parts

to hear this song

that is

only if you're willing to sing

time willing

that is

if you have the courage

god split his virtues

unto infinite folds

and watched and heard

he sang along

and danced too i suppose

i can only hope you did the same


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