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The following comments are for "in the spirit of impermanence i title this haiku, "OF THE UTMOST IMPORTANCE!!! REALLY GUYS!!! REALLY!!!""
by FangChen

FangChen
I don't read a lot of poetry, and I'm not qualified to judge poetry, but . . .

This was fantastic.

I could interpret it so many ways it makes me crazy.

Great piece.

Ochani Lele

( Posted by: OchaniLele [Member] On: December 10, 2008 )

Janice Joplin....ENJOY WHILE YOU CAN...hahahaha!
Hahahaha!

Reminds me of an old Janis Joplin song that had the line "ENJOY IT WHILE YOU CAN"....oh, yeah go to town guys, REALLY!...enjoy! Oh, please have another one on me;-)

( Posted by: TheRealKarmaTseringLhamo [Member] On: December 10, 2008 )

Yeah, Francisco! GET IT WHILE YOU CAN!
By the way, Frisco, I don't drink. Thanks for the clarification, and to you especially, yeah, get it all in while you can, go for it...hahahaha!

Goodbye Francisco;-)

( Posted by: TheRealKarmaTseringLhamo [Member] On: December 10, 2008 )

You TOO Fang Chen...
GET it ALL in while you can...

Shitface, eh? Right;-)

( Posted by: TheRealKarmaTseringLhamo [Member] On: December 10, 2008 )





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