Lit.Org - a community for readers and writers Advanced Search
 




Average Rating
0.00

(0 votes)

You must login to vote

i retort, friend

the lamp shades of our lives and light
move on to others in the night
to those whoever so enticed
to hide own visage from their sights
do

for what the grass might tell the leaves
the leaves might tell to other trees
so it is of sheer necessity
that we

...

hack away their heads

i believe in capital
i believe in commonwealth
i believe in love so pure
the feds would hastily seek a cure
for if i let the weasels in
they shit all over'st me back yard
and that'd just be fuel for fire

i mean hell, i just mowed last week




Related Items

Comments

The following comments are for "a lamp shade, weed whacker, and economy walk into a bar..."
by FangChen





Add Your Comment

You Must be a member to post comments and ratings. If you are NOT already a member, signup now it only takes a few seconds!

All Fields are required

Commenting Guidelines:
  • All comments must be about the writing. Non-related comments will be deleted.
  • Flaming, derogatory or messages attacking other members well be deleted.
  • Adult/Sexual comments or messages will be deleted.
  • All subjects MUST be PG. No cursing in subjects.
  • All comments must follow the sites posting guidelines.
The purpose of commenting on Lit.Org is to help writers improve their writing. Please post constructive feedback to help the author improve their work.


Username:
Password:
Subject:
Comment:





Login:
Password: