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Crack inside my windows
relating false flags and
triumph of the lizard
spirit...

Speaking of spirit...did
i not used to have one???

Vagaries of iniquity...
Some pimps are worse
than others...Id still
wash her feet a thousand
more times...

Speaking of time...am
i running out mine???

Pipes filled with forget
and she pulls a bag of
weed out of her snatch...
"Did you think I was a whore??"
she asks..."No...I didnt"
I say...

Speaking of saying something...
when was the last time i did???

Im leavin on a jet plane
with the knowledge of why I was
brought here...Thank you Krishna...
Thanks for the self-worth...

Speaking of my worthy self...
what do I do with it now???



------
Terence Patrick Burns


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The following comments are for "A hell of a poem..."
by kilgoretrout

As for Terence's Title
I am in agreement.

( Posted by: Flonigus [Member] On: December 6, 2008 )

Terence...
Terence,

For me, it reads like a broken mirror. Like an art deco story. You pick up each piece and slowly turn and look at it and go on to the next piece. Great work. Thank you for this.

Best,
Ariana

( Posted by: Ariana [Member] On: December 8, 2008 )

Terence, again, I'm sorry....
but, according to the, "days of our LIT lives" that I've been reading here, this is my interpretation, (now let's all remember, I'm a bimbo),

YOU BETTER FUCK ME!!!!
OR I'M GONNA FUCK YOU!!!!!! Is that the new motto LENA OWNER! (like no one knew)

(God bless this site because otherwise it's going to die)

And, yea, I have the right....

I've been reading the stupid shit you've been saying...soooo

FUCK YOU!

( Posted by: TAMMYHENDRIX [Member] On: December 10, 2008 )





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