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walmart shopper here
i consume all things like fire
life is meant to end

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The following comments are for "a haiku dedicated to the dedicated"
by FangChen

i hate to admit it but
I shop at Walmart.

:) Ochani Lele :)

( Posted by: OchaniLele [Member] On: December 4, 2008 )

Hahaha! ME too;-) WalMart FLAMING smokes ALIVE!
Wal-Mart is a soulless conglomerate entity from outer-space that consumes all local businesses and takes away all competition, like a pouncing predator. I hate Wal-Mart and all it represents, yet, because Americans have been reduced to a nation of consumers of mostly products of China (since we owe our very ASS-etts to her) then most are forced to shop at Wal-Mart by need more so than choice...can't beat those Wal-Mart prices, comes at the price of Americans losing living wage jobs and getting cheap Chinese slave labor...high profits for the MONSTER corporations like Wal-Mart...I am disgusted each time I buy something there, because I live in a small town, very few choices, usually I shop at what few small local business speciality stores are left, but some thing I HAVE NO CHOICE but to buy at Wal-Mart...makes me fee DIRTY and FILTHY every time I give those Wal-Mart conglomerate greed pigs a dime! UGH! Such is the price of the capitalistic pyramid scheme and free enterprise system completely greedy and out of control!

Anyway, love YOUR poem, smart! Sharp! BURNS real GOOD!



( Posted by: TheRealKarmaTseringLhamo [Member] On: December 4, 2008 )

Thanks, Eric, WalMart Video...
I have seen the complete documentary on WalMart and the HIGH cost of low prices....yep:-(

( Posted by: TheRealKarmaTseringLhamo [Member] On: December 4, 2008 )

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