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Do little smiles make me weak...
or is it the huge hearts that
see right through mine eyes...

I have missed my little homeys...

Frankie...Christian...Mary...Samantha...

Making those hearts happy is why
I still exist...it certainly
isnt for drinking or writing...

No matter what the bible says...

Boon Babaji Boon...give me back my
family...my little homeys...better
to die near them then live life afar...

Soon little homeys...Soon...



------
Terence Patrick Burns


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The following comments are for "Queens and Trees and Family"
by kilgoretrout

You're a good man Terence!
Hi Terence...absolutely loved this.
I've always said you were a pussy cat underneath that satirical facade!

There's nothing like children to reach even the hardest of hearts...and notwithstanding family feuds...the sense of peace that comes knowing there is a family to come home to when it counts.

You're really a good guy Charlie Brown!

Bea

( Posted by: Beatrice Boyle [Member] On: December 1, 2008 )





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