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Line inside of a line
Curiosity at emotions evoked
The deeper meaning
Distracting all the senses

Puntucation was incorrect
Like demons driven to distraction
Inside of a deeper meaning
The beginning of all these things

Falling off one side of a map
The edge of the world forseen
The deepest meaning possible
Form so good it was distracting

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Does the wadded up paper ball or the bowling ball fall faster?


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