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The rabbits are many on these
streets down here...
The rabbits are hungry for
crack and for beer...
The rabbits will beg for
all you can spare...
The rabbits are gods peeps
so treat them with care...


"Dont feed the Rabbits!!!"...

he screams in my ears...

"You will only encourage them!!!"

Yes encourage them...now why would I
wanna do something like that...

------
Terence Patrick Burns


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by kilgoretrout

Tenderloin With Terence
I'm there, brother (if I may say). The meaning of that could change for any of us.

~ John

( Posted by: Flonigus [Member] On: November 22, 2008 )

Rabbits...
Encouraging rabbits is a noble endeavor, I mean...not to be taken lightly, such as this poem. I refuse to discourage rabbits or eat them, for meat, I only eat fish, and even then I feel guilty now...I mean I could be eating somebody's great grandmother? Still, got to have my Cod and my Dolphin-Free Tuna now and then, otherwise not enough protein for my anemia problem, and I think soy sucks!

A thinking man's rabbit poem indeed, good job, Terence, now it's time to encourage the feeding of ducks! Though most waddle about in the muck..not their fault.


Namaste,
Lena

( Posted by: TheRealKarmaTseringLhamo [Member] On: November 22, 2008 )

more rabbits
In our last episode, we left our hero in Frisco, I believe, clicking his heels. So would that make the rabbits homeless?
If I interpret this right, I can appreciate where your heart is, and like the line "the rabbits are [g]ods peeps, so treat them with care".
I like it because I interpret it as, the rabbits are Gods', as in His.

( Posted by: robnjop [Member] On: November 22, 2008 )

Senior Trout
Pest Pie of Poem yet Terence. Far more organic than the counterparts of Jewlicious. Becoming bolder. Words written with more Trout.

And the answer we await ...

firstedition

( Posted by: firstedition [Member] On: November 23, 2008 )

Gave me a smile
Half-tempted to pin a copy of this to the wall by the soup line at my local friendly homeless shelter. Think it might give some of the guests there a smile too.

( Posted by: mobiussoul [Member] On: November 23, 2008 )

Spanks
Thanks and not and homeless rabbits fill my garden with gods annoyance and choosing a homeless life showed balls and not much else...

( Posted by: kilgoretrout [Member] On: November 24, 2008 )





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