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Nope...Not My Baby...
Nope...Not My Baby...
Nope...Not My Baby...

Gods got a sick sense of humor...not that sick...

I told her to move back home and
take care of the baby she already had...
That she was running away from a dream
towards an empty headed nightmare...

She thought I was being cruel...

Dont mean to say I told her so...but...

Nope...Not My Baby...
Nope...Not My Baby...
Nope...Not My Baby...

Good Luck former student...Best of luck...

------
Terence Patrick Burns


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The following comments are for "Not My Baby..."
by kilgoretrout

*sighing*
this reminds me so much of a girl I once knew, it’s uncanny. Her name was Tabitha , crazy girl with a cat’s name, and as she fled the scene she left kiddies behind like a trail of bread-crumbs… she once tried to tell me a baby was hers, but she got the math wrong. she ran away then, out of embarrassment, I think. haven’t seen her since, tried to find her before, but… *shrugs*… sometimes I think you’re my Tyler Durban, slicker alter me…

this is sad, stark and too memorable for hers or yours or my own good… frankness is compelling, but I wish that it wasn’t.

( Posted by: AuldMiseryGuts [Member] On: November 20, 2008 )





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