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Ugghhh Dorothy never had it this rough...
Just click my heels three times and stuff...
Theres no place like home...

Sorry New York City...
Please take me back...
I promise not to leave you again baby...
Well maybe for Mother India...

That Frisco bitch meant nothin to me...
I swear youre the only one I love...
It was just a fling...a 97 night stand...
You know I never meant to hurt you baby...

Theres No place like home...
Theres no place like home...
Theres no place like home...

------
Terence Patrick Burns


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The following comments are for "Theres No Place Like Home"
by kilgoretrout

Terence in retreat !
Ah Terence...I knew she wouldn't catch you...get your running shoes on quickly my friend!!

Bea

( Posted by: Beatrice Boyle [Member] On: November 19, 2008 )

I suppose


there will come a time when I'm writing the same about leaving London. but "home" presents its own problems, and "no place like" covers a multitude of sins...

a wise soul once said to me that the geographical solution is usually devoid of resolution... I've been quoting her to would-be wayfarers ever since... but then if I don't listen then why would any body else...?

the line "a 97 night stand" made me spit coffee on the screen, I laughed so hard...

I smile, but its wryly, and over my shoulder.

( Posted by: AuldMiseryGuts [Member] On: November 20, 2008 )

kilgoretrout... the joys and pains of domicile
I fucking loved this. It reads like one man's 'journey' in the context of a look at two cultures and a woman found in one. Good work.

Best,
Ariana

( Posted by: Ariana [Member] On: November 21, 2008 )





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