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I watch the world pass by
So alone today
No one in which to confide
I just want to run away.

The air grows colder
As the night moves on
I feel no more bolder
For my life is gone

I sit back and wonder
What happened to my life
I hear a clash of thunder
All I think of is a knife

It would be so swift
Bringing my life to an end
But perhaps I can life
My head up once again

I donít think itís true
I donít think Iím able
So strong are so few
To rewrite a fable.




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The following comments are for "I watch the world pass by"
by kimmysings17

You are alright...
I see you are up and trying.

( Posted by: judi1 [Member] On: June 11, 2004 )

kimmy.........
Never let YOUR world pass you by, don't expand your horizons, bring back the boundaries to what is immediately around you.

Make your world stop until you are ready to start walking with it again.

A very touching poem.

Alex :-)

( Posted by: londongrey [Member] On: July 20, 2004 )





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