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Unique View

Without a care, no one knows exactly why
we change, but we do.
Each host lets go of its cover, bare for all to see, preparing for winter sleep.

Slowly without sound we change, greenish, deep reds, browns, oranges, bright yellowish leaves..

Ripped from our home, sailing, floating, traveling without a care, too soon a part of the earth.
So much like the winter counterpart; snowflakes, silent and beautiful, make a blanket collage of color on the ground for just a brief view, before the wind with its broad-brush strokes paints another swipe and changes it again.

At the same time we see this beauty unfolding before us, raise your eyes and see the colors, and know; for a short time engagement, unique tapestries are just around each day till next year.

by Amyís mom


"Name no one man"- Palin


The following comments are for "Unque View"
by AmysMom

Nature's canvas.
Hi Amy's mom...welcome to're going to love it here!

You've painted a truly lovely picture, a feast for the eyes and heart. Nature getting ready for her long sleep until Spring.

Well done!


( Posted by: Beatrice Boyle [Member] On: November 14, 2008 )

Unique View
I can only say thanks I have never though of myself as a writter.
My counter part(husband )is a written on this site for 3years or so.
Thanks again,

( Posted by: AmysMom [Member] On: November 14, 2008 )

Hey Mom
You go girrrrl! I wanna bend you and spend you until I'm spent like a lemon- ! down my leg.


( Posted by: drsoos [Member] On: November 19, 2008 )

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