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She cursed her way into my life...

"Ill fuckin stab you in the throat"...

I was smitten...

Nose ringed and just enough lesbian to keep me happier...

Shes coming for another visit in 8 days...

She said we should get married...

Maybe shes right...

Half Japanese and Half Crazy...

I love Maryann...

------
Terence Patrick Burns


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The following comments are for "rock and roll"
by kilgoretrout

I love Maryann too
and I haven't even met her... this manages to be both in-yer-face straight up and uncomplicatedly affectionate at the same time... love that...

but then I like people that way, endearingly fucked-up...

(yeah, maybe you should).

( Posted by: AuldMiseryGuts [Member] On: November 13, 2008 )

Terence in love!!
Terence...married...you???

I pictured you as a die hard loner, determined to go his own way unencumbered...accountable to no one. I tip my hat to the female that's lasssoed
your heart!

You old softie you! Go for it!

Bea

( Posted by: Beatrice Boyle [Member] On: November 13, 2008 )

Terence in love!!
Terence...married...you???

I pictured you as a die hard loner, determined to go his own way unencumbered...accountable to no one. I tip my hat to the female that's lasssoed
your heart!

You old softie you! Go for it!

Bea

( Posted by: Beatrice Boyle [Member] On: November 13, 2008 )

My heart is melting
Awwwwww . . .

Just don't shoot up and play William Tell. Holy --

( Posted by: Viper9 [Member] On: November 13, 2008 )

Half Japanese
Maybe the Japanese blood in me makes me genuinely like this piece.
I could almost see Maryann. I could almost understand why you were smitten.
Cheers to both of you.

( Posted by: ruthpenn [Member] On: November 15, 2008 )

The way it is,
Very point blank expression of love. I think 'real' love is probably more to this degree that all the mush and roses the ad agencies try to sell us.

I remember laying next to my wife in a hospital bed years ago, no knowing if she would make it to the new year, and I had thoughts of all the arguments we'd had over the previous years -- because that is what strengthened our life and love.

Nice touch on this.

BW

( Posted by: BWOz [Member] On: November 15, 2008 )





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