Lit.Org - a community for readers and writers Advanced Search
 




Average Rating
9.66

(3 votes)


RatingRated by
10Unknown
10Unknown
9Unknown

You must login to vote

Push me to the edge,
I値l always back down.
You know I知 afraid
To lose this love I found.

I値l kiss you, I値l touch you,
I値l fuck you if you want,
Just don稚 leave me
Alone in the dark.

You know I知 scared
And so insecure.
I hate you for that,
But I love you more

I知 nothing if you say so.
I知 everything if you want.
I can be dumb as all hell,
Or brilliantly smart.

Tell me what you want,
Everything you need,
Because you know I値l deliver
On a bended knee.

I want to say no,
Somewhere deep inside,
But then you would go,
Pushing me aside.



Related Items

Comments

The following comments are for "Twisted Love"
by kimmysings17





Add Your Comment

You Must be a member to post comments and ratings. If you are NOT already a member, signup now it only takes a few seconds!

All Fields are required

Commenting Guidelines:
  • All comments must be about the writing. Non-related comments will be deleted.
  • Flaming, derogatory or messages attacking other members well be deleted.
  • Adult/Sexual comments or messages will be deleted.
  • All subjects MUST be PG. No cursing in subjects.
  • All comments must follow the sites posting guidelines.
The purpose of commenting on Lit.Org is to help writers improve their writing. Please post constructive feedback to help the author improve their work.


Username:
Password:
Subject:
Comment:





Login:
Password: