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1)I Hate Jews...

The river by my house
tastes like plastic...
The ocean is filled
with farts...
The trees and the bees
no longer have knees...
I hate jews...


2)pay attention

Pay attention he says..
Pay me some attention...
Then he steals it...
He just stole your attention...


3)Some of best friends are jews

I digress...
Just thought you should know...
Some of my best friends are jews...
Just wanted to stir the shit...


THE END

------
Terence Patrick Burns


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The following comments are for "I LOVE JEWS!!!!!"
by kilgoretrout

Jew hater? I don't believe you, Terence;-)
Oh, Terence,
You already told me yesterday how much you hated Jews, then you changed it to how much you loved Jews, make up your mind, in any case...

OK, so you hate Jews? Get in line. Bring a bag lunch, it is a long line, and you may be at the back of the line for quite some time.


Thanks for making me smile again, today;-)

( Posted by: TheRealKarmaTseringLhamo [Member] On: November 11, 2008 )

hate?
so I read #1 and I thought here's you taking a pop at racist redneck reasoning, and the arbitrary blame-slinging and scapegoating of those who go in for such things… I never thought for one moment it was you, Terence who hated Jews, or anybody else… just figured you were laughing at those who did…

maybe I’d feel different if you’d said you hated the Irish… I don’t know, we’d have to conduct that experiment in the spirit of scientific enquiry… providing you signed some kind of release first ;)…

so I read #2 and I thought now you’re swinging for those ego-centric attention-seeking missiles who’ll say anything as long as you’re looking at them… politicians, celebs, suits, soapbox blokes with megaphones, you, me… yeah, we all do it… perhaps why we’re all still dumb enough to fall for it…

so I read #3 and I thought… well, not a lot… #3 tells me that #1 was an applied exercise in #2 and that you’re too clever for your own or anybody else’s good…

but you never fooled me, alright? You’re not a hater, and I’m here ‘cause I want to be. hope you’re well, and ommmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm.

( Posted by: AuldMiseryGuts [Member] On: November 11, 2008 )

interesting
Why don't you try writing the same thing with women, gays, or blacks instead and see what kind of responses you get.
Cheers

( Posted by: Jewlicious [Member] On: November 13, 2008 )

impressions of 'stirs the shit : swims therein'
The Irony. Of course, I hate the Irony ...
1- 2- 3- bullet proof. Then some of my
best friends ...
Use of diction on the last line ''flaccid''.
Of KT's work thus far, appears strong.

firstedition

( Posted by: firstedition [Member] On: November 13, 2008 )

The motivation for this piece?
Kilgoretrout:

As a writer, and an author, I know first-hand that everything written in the realm of fiction or poetry has a hidden meaning, an agenda, and a motivation. It's the heart of the piece, really, and it's not always obvious to the reader. It's also key to understanding the heart and soul of the writer.

Art, true art, is always complicated. The artist even moreso.

Here at litdotorg we have an advantage: We have the authors in our midst, and we can ask, "What motivated this piece?" "What are you trying to accomplish with this piece?" "What is the purpose of this piece?"

So, please, share with us and allow us a glimpse into your artistic mind. Would you kindly answer those 3 questions so we can learn how you came to pen this, and post this to litdotorg?

Thank you in advance:
Ochani Lele

( Posted by: OchaniLele [Member] On: November 14, 2008 )

Inspiration Station
Hmmm Who am I??? Why am I here??? and stuff...
Thanks everybody...and if ur interested in my motivation best thing would be to read Shannons comment...Hes my psychic twin...we were seperated at birth...it was very traumatic...

Secondly Lele..how bout this for an answer...

Why we write...

We write because life is hard and pancakes taste good...

We write because singing and dancing was already taken...

We write because an unmercifully merciful god commands it...

We write to pop pinholes in this astral prison system...

We write to get laid...

We write to get paid...

We write to have an excuse for being an alcoholic...

We write because the sun is hot and the birds still fly...

We write because sometimes handbags and blowjobs are not enough...

We write because it is sacred as we are sacred...

We write because talking just makes us sound crazy...

We write because we can...

We write because we must...

We write because Walt Whitman did...

We write because how else would the voiceless be heard...

We write to communicate words that sound would be too afraid to express...

We write to be right to be heard to be...

( Posted by: kilgoretrout [Member] On: November 14, 2008 )

kilgore
As opposite as night and day, yet I always ask myself, "what is it I like so much about this guy?".
Heart of gold.
You write because you will.
I wish for you the best. Robert

( Posted by: robnjop [Member] On: November 14, 2008 )

Why do we write?
We write because we want to forget the stubborn ache in our hearts; we write because we want to smile when the world looks at us with gloomy eyes; we write because we are bored shitless; we write because we believe we can be like Dylan or Virginia or Sylvia; we write because our starving minds ought to; we write because it makes us live a different world that is utterly different from ours; we write because most of the time life's a bitch; we write because there's passion being stirred inside us; we write because we are flesh and blood.

( Posted by: ruthpenn [Member] On: November 14, 2008 )

kilgoretrout and Ruthpenn
I love both pieces about "why we write."

Kilgoretrout: "We write to have an excuse for being an alcoholic." I second that!

Ruthpenn: ". . . we write when we are bored shitless . . . " Many a night when I am very bored, I get very drunk, and I write my best prose ever . . . until I sober up and realize I was just a drunken mess!

I want to iclude these in "Majestic" . . . which will start as soon as the template is up and running.

I love you guys! Such incredible work.

Ochani

( Posted by: ochanilele [Member] On: November 15, 2008 )





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