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Turn my grief into grace
With just one simple short embrace

Because if you decide to go
The blood in my veins will no longer flow.

you don't really know what you do to me
Because a simple friend you only see

The idea of you gone
Means I'll never be moving on.

I can't have yu doing this
Because part of my soul I would miss.

You see you make every rainy day clear
Make the prettiest of stars slowly come near.

That empty hole with you just seems to shrink
Because my love grows with every blink.

You give me enough courage to fight
By holding me close when I'm not alright.

So you can't leave, not without me
Kill me first and then you can be.

Who Are We If We Cannot Imagine Peace?

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