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the whole of my existence
is surreal
in its complexity
for eternity

silence looms
its deafening loudness
envelopes the very core
of
my soul

darkness
crushes my body
every molecule
screams
in apathetic
torment

i want to move
i want to run
but trapped am i
inside the confines
of this prison

forever will i suffer
my fate
and the loneliness
of the grave

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He who is unable to live in society, or has no need because he is sufficient for himself, must be either a beast or a god -Aristotle


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