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fantasy is

that i could be rich
that i could be sexy
that i could be famous
that i could be social
that i could be funny

nothing

reality is

that i could be decent
that i could be moral
that i could be healthy
that i could be loved
that i could be wanted

wanted

what is

that i could forget
that i could control
that i could hate
that i could maim
that i could kill

that i could be more
than just a Beast?

perceived

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He who is unable to live in society, or has no need because he is sufficient for himself, must be either a beast or a god -Aristotle


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The following comments are for "Perception"
by thebeast

Perception...
"Fantasy is nothing reality is...wanted what is perceived".. This was what I found in the midst of your poem, wondering if you knew it was there all the while...in it's simplistic way this piece is profound in it's own right...go deeper.

He who is unable to live in society, or has no need because he is sufficient for himself, must be either a beast or a god -Aristotle...I agree.

( Posted by: LMJ [Member] On: November 7, 2008 )





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