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if i poured
water into a glass;
will it not fill?

if i gave
you all of my love,
would you return it
as a whole?

do i get
what i give?

or is your
love
merely a
bottomless pit?

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He who is unable to live in society, or has no need because he is sufficient for himself, must be either a beast or a god -Aristotle


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