cat without a hat
After I read this I wasn't too sure what to make of it because it felt as if it were missing something. Not sure what to say as far as comments goes I was just going to close this window and go on the next poem, but then it came to me as to what this piece needed to get the point across....visual imagery. I think that if a series of pictures accompanied this piece it would have been a lot better.
TB
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Posted by: thebeast [Member] On: November 5, 2008
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TB :)
That's an awesome suggestion.. just wondering how can you add pictures here in lit.org?
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Posted by: piggyjc [Member] On: November 5, 2008
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Oink!
This is dada dada dada...blah blah blah;-)
CAT DADA BADA!
Hahahaha!
Hey, Beast, you and Piggyic friends? You got some sort of eye thing in common, how very odd---
--Hey, I think I might just start a DADA thread again real soon, Shannon asked me to...and you know, I think we need a brand new show.
So go do go go go no wo to zo go og og os So yo do meow meow meow meow.....love the depth of this, the artistry, the bullshittery! Lovely it really...quite cat like, but why would I think that? You've got me to barking barking farking....see
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Keep on writing you two and maybe consider a collaboration maybe, since you are so good at suggestions...I think that would be awesome, I'd pay my dime to watch.
I like to watch.
Watches
shoes
Glue
Blue
doo doo
DO!
Thanks for sharing, as you can see you have so inspired me, with you writery, write more. I WANT MORE! GIVE IT TO ME~ I NEED IT~ Oh, yes, this is ART
fart
start
mart
cart
Most Sincerely,
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You newest and greatest FAN!
dan
man
pan
tan
Namaste,
With ALL Love,
Go for the different, go for the ART!!!!
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Posted by: piggyjc [Member] On: November 5, 2008
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Piggy Oink! Hahahaha!
You got my above response to you then;-) You know what Dada? That is all I was doing in response to your piece which I found quite amusing and refreshing...glad you responded with laughter. Laughter is good. Always good;-)