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This see-saw, this merry-go-round...

Ever feel like you want get off...
get off... just to exhale what the hell I may as well tell, although I know we've all got stories to tell but you ain't me... so I'm going to tell mine…

No this ain't no ordinary rhyme…so sorry; life can be a bit scary at times… it might just be a nightmare...

Ain't no shake and bake...I'm talking slithering, slippery, predatory snakes from past to present tense, damn this hellish freaknic ain’t no walk in the park or sandy shores it ain't even a picnic...it’s hell bent…

BUT...I'm tired tired to the point of being inspired to flow in this direction, I'm not looking for any constellation prizes or kisses neither nor hugs not even protection, I'm just looking for a way... OFF THIS RIDE...

Let me start this trip so you don’t slip and you'll know just what I'm talking about...

creepy seedy men the ones with the sheepish grins and tight eyed looks running side ways from the corners of their eyes with everything ugly and vile hidden inside, behind storied smiles these calculated... predatory pedophiles…

from victims themselves they learned to dispel the ever growing monster festering inside... creeping in and out of seeping thoughts that grew into demonic acts of beastly genocide... no longer the same little boys casting aside there young bright toys for natural use they grew tired, Ah… but to play with young and innocent little girls...somehow they felt inspired…

I know I know you saying what in the world!

YES IN THIS WORLD...

My sentiments exactly... and in the church no less could or would this pedophile be... lets back this thing up cause YES-OH-YES I'm stressed and putting it down! I got to get my Ill off and this is the only way that I know how...

So let me...

corners...locked doors or cars odd places never explored... behind underneath coat closets or in the chapel seats... in the dark out of reach...out of reach for the help that each child needs...

that’s where you'll find this leech, this freak he or she could look as you or I... lays back cool for he or she’s no fool… could be looking right at you... there, in your face an ordinary yet so unordinary waiting…waiting to take his prey...

Burning...I feel it just like it was yesterday... freshly I can see him not seeing me watching what he looked like as he left me...on the chapel seat fear gripping me ever weak this child I use to be…
...and again this spirit re-visited me... by visiting my child... this pedophile, this pedophile reached past and beyond me…

reached out to touch a flower so innocent and lovely for as much as purity in this here world will allow...UGGGGGGGGOD!

STOP THIS RIDE I WANT OFF...

I toss and turn, burn and yearn to learn inside how a person could walk past their pride... and hold their heads up high after committing such a treacherous act of genocide...HELL…WHY...HOW...

You low belly crawling, unconcerned about who's future you're robbing, back stabbing, unadulterated kid snatch riding...rubbing...grind-bump grubbing, unrealistic host of a human being, con-artist-driving, self gratifying, unstructured, insecure, resemblance of life...you dirty nasty dog... HOW could you and WHY...

Your card has been peeped you in the hole (the pit) YO... and this isn't it, it's not enough! It’s NOT enough...your cover is about to be BLOWN....BLOWN to HELL it's time... it's time you know, it's time...

Whoever you are...OH and YOU KNOW...HOW DARE YOU...HOW DARE YOU...HOW COULD YOU...
touch a child?

(STANLEY WILLIS)...?
(Michael)...?
(Kroger)...?

Have faith in God...Watch the world...BUT...keep your eyes on your children.

------
LMJ


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The following comments are for "Stop this ride...I want off..."
by LMJ

"creepy seedy men"
LMJ, not sure how I missed this the first time round, but as someone who has known many a creep seedy slithering slippery predator, this poem speaks to me, in tones of rage and defiance and white-hot righteous anger and bewilderment...

I want to get off too.

( Posted by: AuldMiseryGuts [Member] On: November 1, 2008 )

AULD & DES...
Too close for comfort is right...I have been this child and as I've said in this piece; this spirit re-visited me again by visiting my child. So Yes righteous anger it is indeed! Yes it is sad but a neccessary topic because it's true to life...OH and Des: I will have some new stuf up reall soon on myspace, I should be done soon with the entire Cd and on to the next I've been so busy with work that I hadn't really had the chance to concentrate on the Cd. BUT SOON my Pretty's! SOON!!!!

Thank you both for your valued comments!
One Love!

( Posted by: LMJ [Member] On: November 2, 2008 )





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