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Chapter 7

The road seemed like is was never gonna end. I would just look at the road and it appeared to go forever.
Aline and Sally were out of it. I wished I could get some sleeping time every now and then. I was getting tired, I'd been driving for nearly 2 days straight with no sleep.
My eyes were blood shot. My brain was not working right from the lack of sleep. The only thing that was keeping me awake was me slapping myself every so often.
After another hour of driving I saw something faint in the distance. I couldn't tell what it was, it might've been a mirage, but I couldn't tell that far away. As I got closer and closer, I was finally able to make out what it was. It looked like a gas station.
Thank God I thought, finally.
I made it to the gas station. Sally and Aline woke up as I pulled in next to the gas pump. I told them to get out, get something eat, or something to drink. They both went to the bathroom. That wasn't such a bad idea. I went to the bathroom.
I walked in, and it about nearly made me puke because the smell was so bad. I tried to bear the smell, I opened the stall. And there was the biggest freakin' piece of crap floating in the toilet I had ever seen in my life. I did get sick this time around. I ran outside stumbling over everything. I was gagging.
I just said the heck with that and went behind the building to take a leak.
I walked around, being careful not to step in any kind of crap. I made it to the back safe and sound. I was about to take a leak when I heard the restroom door open and close. It was on the mens side. I leaned back a little to see who it was. There was nobody there. I leaned back and I came face to face with the most horrific thing I had ever seen in my life. It had firy red eyes, with bulging muscles. It was around 6'10. A claw had been grafted into his hand. This claw was extremely sharpe. It was wearing brown pants and brown shoes, with no shirt. It took on the form of a human. The creature was bald headed, with scars all on his head from he has been operated on so many times.
And here I was standing here taking a leak, no gun, no kind of defense, nothing. I slowly zipped my pants back up. It inclined its body over to me, I could smell its breath, it smealt like sulfar and ash. The creatures teeth were yellow. They would glow in the dark if he smiled.
The girls were in the restrooms, and I was standing here looking death straight in the eyes. The tanned green skin on the monster rubbed up against mine as it got closer to me. I was afriad to scream.
At this moment, I didn't know what I was gonna do?

To be continued...

Authors note: I'm sorry for the delay in the stories, I had a little problem. Its solved now. Comment on this one and tell me what you think.

Dream as if you'll live forever, live as if you'll die today. - James Dean

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The following comments are for "The Darkness: Chapter7"
by Witness95

hey i finnaly got to finish reading it the last time when you wrote it i fell asleep but it's good keep it up please help me with mine

i've got 15 views omne one and 11 on the other


( Posted by: mikado [Member] On: August 10, 2001 )

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