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Piff, Paff, Puff
is Danish for Rice Krispies
Snap, Crackle, Pop.

I see possibilities
in your abilities.
Sharpen them
as you dull your senses;
senseless, wild child.

Your political or executive
future died on Girls Gone Wild
or youtube.

Momís mail comes back
Dadís Alzheimerís negates a relationship too.

Quick, and easy,
you paid for college with carnal knowledge.
Your legacy a matter of degree.



"A foolish consistency is the hobgoblin of little minds, adored by little statesman and philosophers and divines. With consistency a great soul has simply nothing to do."

- Ralph 'Where's Waldo' Emerson

"I don't know half of you half as well as I should like. And I like less than half of you half as well as you deserve."
- Bilbo Baggins

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The following comments are for "Pro Choice?"
by drsoos

drsoos...Piff Paff Puff!
OKIE DOKIE! Hmmmm? Unsure if this is a statement about Palin or bad girls in general who use their physical attributes to attain power, but learned something new about Danish Rice Krispies! Cool. Another drsoos original, though this time, I am unsure (I am unsure about a lot of things these days, though my senses have not been dulled by my recent debut in girls gone wild, kidding of course, can you imagine, grannies gone wild?) Yeah, there is something for everybody these days....including my husband who doesn't seem to mind my Fall season beauty...hehehee;-) If only the Barbie Bimb-bots stayed out of politics and left their Sheep-ro-Bots alone to think for themselves, but thinking is only for liberals and commies and socialists I guess, you know all those unpatriotic unAmerican folk that still have a brain of their own. Thanks for this whatever it meant.


( Posted by: TheRealKarmaTseringLhamo [Member] On: October 22, 2008 )

Lena- unguided
I suppose this is like I train without a track. I let my mind wander and wrote it down.


( Posted by: drsoos [Member] On: October 23, 2008 )

Soos ride to the WRITE OFF with Kilgortrout?
Well, whatever works for you, I nominated you for the Write-Off with Terence, he is up to going at it with you right now...I would love to see that...what say thee? Or have you already? Just logged on, so I haven't started to look around yet too deeply, noticed your comment to me by name, Oh? LENA< yes, that's me.

Keep on riding down that track guided or unguided it all comes out good in the soos train trails.


( Posted by: TheRealKarmaTseringLhamo [Member] On: October 23, 2008 )

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