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The other tenants of the house have finally awaken
Now the bed creaks with a thousand foreign voices
The walls spit back all those insignificant conversations
And the old faceless monster is shaking the closet again

This is dead time
Between blinking
And a new world
This is dead time

And the old faceless monster is actually you
Those insignificant conversations are your life
A thousand foreign voices scream your dreams
The other faces you had lie shattered on the floor

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